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Return of the beast

"I love it. Love it. LOVE IT"

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Great

"Great so far , it has kept me on my toes"

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Nail bitting.

"The ending was so such an anti climax from the rest of the book. Just walking up to the drmon and killing it. Just to simple. "

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Return of the Beast

"This story was really good, i got thrown off especially by the Demon Damien could not see how he was so humanized toward Nadia & how did they do it.? "

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The beast

"The story line was really good. There was some misspellings. An, a couple of words used incorrectly. I feel they should've grieved or taken the loss a little harder, but know the story had to continue. Great read despite that. I have enjoyed both books immensely."

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The Return of the Beast Sequel to

"Wow! What an adventure! I didn’t get to read the first book but was fine until “The Evil Grandfather” showed up. I was able to quickly understand what happened through terrific storytelling’s. "

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The Return of the Beast Sequel

"This story would make one Epic movie. I absolutely love reading, however some stories really do make awesome movies as well. "

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The return of the beast

"Excellent not boring at all"

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The haunting of hillcrest manor

"I like the way it kept you and wanting to know what came next I see there is a 3rd book I hope it's as good.very well done."

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Review

"Needs work on spelling and grammar but very good story line. Keeps you coming back for more"

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The Return of The Beast

"A very engaging story from the first book though the last line in the second and final story. I got so caught up in the plight of Nicholas and Elizabeth, I jumped ahead to the second book, then went back to the original story the next day and was totally confused. But I I caught up. I won’t give away any of the storyline but will say Don’t Read Ahead. The mystery and intrigue will keep you reading this wonderfully written story."

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The haunting

"Realy enjoying the books"

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The return of the best sequel of the Haunting of hillcrest manor

"This was a awesome book I couldn't put it down"

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It is very fantastic it is a heart touching novel

"heart touching when I feel cry I read it if the writer is reading so I recpect you"

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The Return of the Beast

"Had a good plot but was too repeating when describing scenes."

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The return of the beast the sequel

"I loved the plots and the twists and turns of the chapter and characters. Keeping you interested in what has and will happen in the storyline and characters "

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The Beast Returns to Hillcrest Manor

"Grammar is much more an issue than with the original story"

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Good story to read

"Good story to read, although it was a bit of a shame that it wasn't proof read before being published. Some of the spelling and grammatical errors were atrocious. "

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Not what I expected but great

"Wonderfull story great"

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Good Storyline, Just Needs a LOT of Improvement

"The plot is good, but this seemed to written in a complete hurry. A lot of work need to be done in terms of grammar and punctuation. "

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