superb

"I liked the plot, it was unsual but very captivating. GOOD BOOK!"

Codex Part 1: The Story of the Commander

"Damn.. this storyy is amazing.. I started to read this book cause of curiosity and did not expect it to be so interesting. The storyline, the plots and tye characters their all amazing."

Amazing book!

"Sadly, I feel your work is a bit underrated on this site. Your writings seem kinda profecional, and idea itself is pretty unusal and original. You are very creative and talented. Hope that one day I'll be able to get written copy of your books, if not in my native language, then at least on English. Great stuff, I am litterally amazed! "

The story of the commander

"Good writing style and interesting plot"

Awesome story

"It was great !! Loved it can't wat to read the next part "

This is four all four parts they are so amazing

"There wasnt a single thing i didnt like about this book all in alI very very good reads I have told everyone about these books honestly it was so good and made so much sense and seems to be so real sounding that these books truely had me terrified and questioning reality"

Codex part 1 the story of the commander

"Love this story!! Soooooo good!! thanks so much for sharing can't wait to read the rest"

Codex part one is awesome

"I loved the story line the characters and everything in between. Can't wait to start reading part two."

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Very Interesting Insight to the "Secret World" around us

"I really enjoyed the concept behind your story and Zoe. The fact that we have so much going on in the world and that Zoe can see things from ghosts and demons, to things like Liars and etc. was very intriguing. The author has a good way of exploiting the darkness around us that we sometimes can't see and it worked beautifully in the chapters. I loved the way that you wrote the story. Your descriptions were very nice to read. There were a couple errors, but they don't break up the text too much for the reader to find them distracting. Overall, I really enjoyed this story and the concept that the author placed behind it."

CODEX Part 1

" The plot was very original which instantly pulled me in. However the author jumped scenes without any warning. I had to read back several times to understand what was happening/ which character was speaking. With a little more work on the seques, this story could be perfect. Can't wait to see how the next book turns out."

Wonderful Story

"Hi, I saw your post and looked into your profile for neat stories and I found one! Ok, first of all, the summary. It think it could use more work. Especially the last sentence. Another thing, the introduction. The very first sentence: There's a story that goes like this. This isn't very appealing in my eyes. Sorry. It was a bit short too. I think the first sentence could be much improved, perhaps woven into the story. Please show, not tell. Some people like me...do not care about how people look straight up. I think you can show that, not tell. Her wide smile was sick. I think it sounds slang. I think it could be improved. Chapter 1. Her father was a nice man>??? Was? Is, right? Because when you say was, I could see that the father might be the antagonist. Past tense, that sort of stuff, It's rather noticeable. So is Zoe a demon? Ok, I like the creativity in your story...however I find the things above....distracting, so if you fixed that I think it could greatly improve your story. After reading the reviews for this story, I have to whole-heartedly agree with them that There are some gaps in the story which isn't easy to read so make your story smoother in timeline and this story will go far. So a re-edit of the whole thing and fleshing this story out is highly recommended!"

Interesting

"I read the first couple chapters, and I thought that it was enjoyable, but there were a few gaps. I liked the idea of the people born every fifty years with the strange blessing/curse. Your characters were engaging, and I especially like Andy and the strange tall demon so far. Your writing was simple and interesting. I didn't understand how the main character knows the rules or what enforces the rules or what the rules really are. Maybe that comes in later chapters? Also, there was a lot of places (especially in the first chapter) where you needed to do more showing and less telling. It's not a huge deal, but I think that it would really empower your writing. This is an interesting story, and the beginning really has a draw to it. Hope this helps! Good work!"

Watching the Watcher

"Only 4 chapters in, and I'm really enjoying this story. The author has a clever sense of humor which balances out the epic fantasy scale of the piece. I love the premise in particular, how the main character can see the ghosts and demons around her--indeed, all the horrors of the hidden world--but cannot intervene or at times truly understand it. Her sayings about the various inhabitants of her realm are quite witty, and I like her comment that children ghosts are the worst, while demons are more naive, yet generally smarter. The opening chapters have a wide-eyed sense of exploration which is fun for a reader, and you can tell the author takes delight in throwing us curve balls and defying our expectations. My main criticism would be only this: there's a bit too much thrown into the opening chapters, and we don't get a chance to settle into the world comfortably. The first chapter alone is full of quick summary, as the main character comes of age in an instant, and we barely learn about her before we're trying to make sense of her powers and supernatural companions. Maybe some of this could be done more gradually, and we could have another early chapter with his childhood, as she, too, learns to make sense of this world? Then, once she starts off on her own, we're completely up to speed. A few typos to catch in a further edit, such as a misspelling of "Constantine"--and that was a clever moment, when the demon says, "oh, that's just a comic book." Overall, though, a very strong beginning to a fascinating story."

Decent

"Sometimes confusing, grammar and clarity of the sentence isn't always the clrest. Overall not bad"

Well.

"I think you need to work on originality and names. Names are extremely important in writing and can carry heavy significance. I',m sorry, but I only read the first chapter, so that's what this review is based off of. The prologue was extremely cliche and overused; basically says the same about a billion other supernatural, chosen ones, light and darkness stuff. And Middle World? I would stay away from using that, seeing as I, and no doubt others, immediately thought of Middle earth. I also think you tried too hard to make your prophecy mystical and mysterious; it ends up coming off too vague and cliche. I'd suggest staying away from generic names like 'darker side' and such. And I just cringed at the words 'special child.' Could you make it less obvious that you're playing toward the chosen one trope, please. And the concept of being 'able to see evil' is about as generic/cliche as it gets. I'm sorry, but I couldn't read further. Keep writing, and good luck."