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I wish I was a normal girl

"I was emotional throughout the book because I know how it feels to be treated like that but overall it's a good book❤️"

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I WISH IWAS A NORMAL GIRL

"Great book. Love how the author made real life things come out in this book. You will be surprised how many kids go through this. Glad it ended good for Marley."

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Love it!!!

"I loved the story. I am not a fan of the family but I absolutely love that her friends and her brother were by her side. Lovely ending "

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This book is Soo interesting, only took me a week

" This book is Soo good, I like the way the author wrote this book. It is to die for. And the book has really touched me about loving your body the way it is nomatter what anyone says or does. And is someone is bullying or abusing you about it the u should report them. I love this book it has touche be so much I almost cried. I still can't believe the parents, the Marley doesn't deserve them, and shouldn't even call them her parents. P. S. To whoever wrote this book, I love u thanks for touching my heart. And making me understand. ❤️😊"

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It was super emotional...

"I love this book.to the bone and I think people should really get the chance to read it😭😭😭made me get super emotional and I literally cried through...but that's not to say that it was emotional-bad...it was emotional good and I'm happy Marley got the justice she deserves....just kinda wish there was more to the book like a Part two perhaps to just give us an insight of her life after this whole incident 🤭it overall...great book...love it to the bone😗will definitely recommend it to my friend's.. they'll love it too..and the writing style as well ...it just has something about it that just makes me wanna keep reading.. my eyes were literally fixed on the screen and every tym I put my phone down I was left with so much suspense 😂😂😂"

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I Wish I Was A Normal Girl

"This Story Is Amazing❤️❤️ Love It With Every Bit Of My Heart!!!! DEFINITELY RECOMMEND READING!!!!♥️♥️"

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Before You Go

"There was nothing that I didn't really like about the writing style of this book. I would reccomend this book to people who like to see a happy ending from what I have read so far. "

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I wish i was normal

"Enjoy reading this"

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My review on this amazing book

"This book is amazing it shows body positivity and you can be beautiful no matter what it’s such a relief to not have the perfect main character please continue your great work author ❤️❤️"

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Wish I was a normal girl

"Would want to see more of this story please and see how it ends thanks keep up the good work it's got me on my toes "

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Comment

"Its good and hope to see more chapters. I wish it continues with the updating "

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Good work

"Fucking hate the sister and the parents love everyone else but them Hope things get better 4 Marley Recommend this to my friends"

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Some great way to start!!

"Some paragraphs are, to me, very long in size and content. Other than that no shit to complain about. I like the fact that the author tried to bring all possible highschool community members that are looked down upon. Including chilies, Muslims and people of other races other than white. Can't wait to see this story through the end. "

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I wish I was a normal girl

"I love this book so far I feel so bad for Marley no one deserves to be treated like that if I was her I’d tell and just move in with my aunt let the police get involved and move on and be happy "

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Finding heaven

"The plot is meaningful but cut the emphasis on the abuse it really graphic"

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Awesome

"I like the main character Can relate to myself to some extent. "

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Marley

"Love this story. Marley's parent and sister sucks. Why are they so horrible?"

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Amazing. Wonderful story that I relate to.

"I like everything and how the story is structured. May the author Please 😭 update because I'm to know what happens next."

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Hooked

"Best story ever"

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This is good, but Marley's family makes me so p-ed off. 🤬

"Marley shouldn't have to endure her OWN FAMILY calling her names and crap like that, telling her to go kill herself. When Valarie said that I actually yelled out (pretty close to, minus a couple curse words of course, and also, mind you it is like 2:00 in the morning, so yeah, probably woke someone up, lol) "b**** what the h*** do you think you f***ing saying?! She your f***ing sister for crying out loud, what the h*** is wrong with you to want to do that to YOUR OWN F***ING SISTER?!?!!" I thought worse than that as well, especially after when her aunt and grandmother left, and she got beat with a cord. But that's not the point, the point is, no one should be treated like that, and it seriously p-ed me off when Valarie started talking crap like that. 🤬 Ok, rant over. Besides that, which I guess you are supposed to feel when reading the story (like feel the main characters emotions, as well as the others, and of course your own about the situation.) But because you do feel that, it's what makes this a great story, Andi can't wait to read what happens next, because I'm really really hoping, that we get to 'see' Valarie (and her parents of course) get b**** slapped by karma, and well, actually just b**** slapped lol.😂"

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