Julien - A Dark Mafia Romance (First Draft)

ktkirata: The story is really interesting. How the character described in the story is like you can see them and picture how they move, talk and feel in the every plots. Well done writer and keep it up.

JyotiRekha: Great plot Describe the life of orcos moe

Hester: Very good, was short too the point , not lingering on the abuse, pity you didn’t let him step in earlier knowing the abuse was happening, but this is almost real for some women who have gone through it, just wish they could all have a princess at te end of thete tunnel

11busywoman: Happy ending, strength of love, trust, bond

Carla Little: This is a great book! I like the story so much I don’t want it to end! I will definitely read it again.

lblomme: I always love a story where good overcomes evil. The sad start, the growth, and ultimate strength of the main character was well done. The story never lagged and ultimately delivered a happy ending even for characters who were less than stellar. Well done!

Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.

NeenaJ: Well written and captivating

Jkind12: Good read. Short and sweet!