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Seductress

"Good book...."

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Good

"Good so far"

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Good

"Good dlttt glyyhhhh"

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Seductress

"I’m not going to lie this novel has my emotions at an all time high. At first I hated Angelina and then Rafael for treating Lisa how he treated her. Which could have been explained due to the mental condition Angelina would have had him in. I have now read much farther in and I realized that I hate both her AND LISA. They were both terrible people that didn’t deserve Rafael. On one hand there is a facade that was created for the purpose of attraction for a specific person and on the other being manipulated and mentally controlled to love somebody regardless of if they could love you on their own or not. I honestly don’t want any of them to be with him since they are both toxic beings that deserve to be with people that are EXACTLY like themselves or alone. My emotional response to this novel has me picking it up in parts, after breaks here and there to calm my anger, sadness etc at the characters and situations. Regardless I think you are an amazing author and I hope you keep on captivating people with your words. I would recommend this to anybody over 18 that would not be as emotionally involved since it’ll definitely have you feeling all types of ways. "

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Its a good story..i like its plot

"I like the story though but i dnt like Rafael He dont deserve Lisa I will recommend my frndz to read this novel"

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The book is OK

"I give the author credit for finding time to write this book, interesting I will recommended it to my friends Kudos to the rate"

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Good work!

"You have really a good plot. The grammar is good too and the way you switch to different time lines is the best part of this book. It is not at all confusing but synchronizing well with the story. You portrayed the characters well.. Off course the scenes are well described. I must say you made me hate Angelina, though whatever is her childhood and what her best friend said, she is really a top notch villain. What I mean is you have described and build her character in the plot such that the thoughts and emotion tends to emerge and the reader tends to react. Hope you keep on giving such master strokes. Best of luck."

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a good one

"i got hooked to this apps because of this writer "

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