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BROTHERS IN BONDAGE, SISTERS IN SLAVERY

"Orphaned and abandoned children in a dysfunctional united States of America band together for safety from reapers, soldiers, and those that would enslave those ages ten to eighteen in work camps that supply goods to the rich and privileged. This is actually the beginning of a very believable story, and I look forward to seeing what happens to the twins, Lilith and Blair, and to the leader of the group, Aiden. I am also curious as to the connection between Aiden and Alexander aka Lex. this story has some word repeats in some of the sentences. Hint, if you hit read aloud and listen while your story is read to you, you will hear all the little mistakes you have made and will be able to easily correct them."

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