A suspenseful tale

"You weave a complex tale that doesn't grow stale and contains some very strong character interactions. While I read Spirit's feelings towards Soul at the end of the manga a bit differently-he proclaims their bond to be stronger than what he had with his wife in a positive way on the moon-- I thought you handled the evolution of his feelings in this well. There were a few plot moments where abilities were ignored for convenience (why wouldn't Maka just use her perception to find Soul?) and some odd phrasing sometimes, but overall, you manage to craft a story that keeps the reader in suspense."