What is your opinion?
SO PROUD WHAT HAVE YOU DONE SO FAR
"Ok, biased aside, here is what I think so far, the story needs some backstory. The development of Adrien seems kind of rushed, considering a few days. The plot twists seems kind of early to drop, especially Ace's, to have a BIG impact, and the story on how Luna ran away and her start of a new life are great ideas for the story, too late though but if you found a way to implement it, that would be great lore-wise and the idea of killing was too normalized that it kinda demoralizes the characters a bit. Now the praise, all of what i said aside, this is are great keypoints to have in a story, i also love the use of common tropes in stories which made the story very likable ESPECIALLY THE FATHER'S REDEMPTION ARC, that was one of the more powerful scenes in the story. Most of the technicalities on grammar is great enough, although some were off and redundancy can be seen on others but all in all it did not ruined my reading experience, which is nice. I also love the idea on a character who is like non-expressive then finally opens up to appear different, although it lacks reason, it is a great concept. All in all, even though there were points that could have been done, it doesn't mean that the story was bad, just could have been executed fully. The final verdict, 6.9 / 10 seriously though. NO FLAME NO HATE JUST AN OPINION I AM SORRY PLS DON'T HATE ME"
💚💚💚💚💚recommended
"It's a very nice book, I like how she's a rebel and runs away from being controlled, and that she changed herself for the better."
