Amazing, but fixable..

"I am a huge fan of Vampire Diaries and Legacies, so I was excited to read this. The summary seemed promising. But I don't really follow the overall plot of the story and it was hard to get hooked and keep reading. You could try adding some more detail and emotion to it. More of a dark element would make it better. Things like grammar and writing style, and the overall main plot of it all could use fixing, but it's a newer story. So I guess I just have to see what happens. Don't give up!"