What is your opinion?
Good...
"It was too short to feel horror...but it was a great try...it had a good story line...wish it had continued few more chapters....and end would have been still more better.... anyway great job....thanks for the book buddy...💛"
Help Me
"There's a lot of telling instead of showing. Look for all words that tells feeling and write out how they feel at that moment. Bring me into your story, give me names. Dialogue would help with the show don't tell. I wrote like this at the beginning. I was critiqued that I'm to slow down. Instead of jumping into scenes after scenes, walk me into the scenes. I'm not a pro but what I learned I'll pass it on. I sometimes rush through the scenes too. I edit as many times I need to like ten times at the particular scene until I'm satisfied. If you rewrite it, I'd like to read it again. If it's okay with you critique my story, Help Me Find Me."
