Inkitt
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Bittersweet

"This was genuinely a good story and I wish it was complete. The plot was good. The character building was great. It was steamy and hilarious and sad and ominous. I loved it. I wish I could see how the story ends. Felix and Dorian Chase are great characters. The banter between them had me snorting and legit pffting regularly. Eugene was amazing. Spencer cracked me up. Tim is downright adorable. Mandy is an angel. They're all fantastic. Even the bigoted characters are written well. I loved this entire thing. "

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Painted Blue

"This is a good story so far however im not happy it wasn't completed as I thought. I really don't like reading ones the authors are still working on. As many as I read, I HATE the cliff hangers that don't have a sequel I could readily read. Hopefully this one gets completed soon. "

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Painted Blue

"After being invested in the story, I just realised that there’s been no update on the story for so long... I wish the author would continue to write & complete it."

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Painted Blue

"Love the story so far. Good plot and writing is awesome. Cannot wait to read more. Please update as soon as possible."

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I wish it was completed 😭

"I love this story so much. I reread it at least once or twice a year despite being discontinued. My only regret is that I will never know the ending. I would literally pay the author to finish this though I don't have a lot of money anyway. The harmony between the leads and how the story progresses and is fleshed out is just spectacular. Despite the numerous times I've read it, I haven't lost interest even once and I've never failed to laugh. Each read-through is like it's my first time all over again. I would buy this book! I wish there was some way Inkitt could contact the author and beg them to finish. I hope that they are alive and well."

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Painted Blue

"Please continue this story. It is well written, has a plot, has humor, and some steam. I am invested in it and would live to see how you continue to develop not only the 2 main guys but also the supporting characters as well. This reminds me a little of AE Via series nothing special. "

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Painted Blue

"Really good book. The writing style is amazing and the plot is even better. It really left me on my toes. "

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Great read!

"So far this story is great! While it deals with serious topics, there are a lot of funny parts. I can't wait for more!!!!"

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Amazing

"The book is light hearted and serious and so hot "

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Awesome

"This is absolutely amazing I lack words to express how much I love the book"

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Well done!!

"I like the story and the charecters. Chase's and Felix' relationship is cute"

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bomb

"This book is so good like amazing if you love bxb and cop books this is the one for you their isn’t a single 1-d character and the world building is amazing 10/10 "

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Painted Blue

"It was such a good story, the plot and the characters, the writing style, it's a really good read, only thing is that this book was updated last about 3 years ago💀 Author, if you're reading this please update😭"

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Awesome story

"Ok I gotta say I love this book and I'm loving the whole plot line and the writing is gr8 and I hope the writer will do more books with Dorian and felix 😁"

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Great

"It's very intricate. I also like how it references and uses real criminally associated vocabulary. The weave of crime into the story is also good."

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Awesome....

"Gosh... This book is amazing. I couldn't put it down once. You earned my first review btw 😊. It's a nice read and is recommended.. 👏👏"

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Tori

"This story got me really interested and I normally don't read storys on here. Please update."

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Painted Blue

"Beautifully written and I'm in love with the characters and dialogue!! One of my favorite reads💜💜"

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Painted Blue

"Smart dialogue makes this story flow.l'm kinda touched with how Chase and Felix are with each other ,but depressed that attitudes about homosexuality in 2020 are still interchangeable with those in the 1950's."

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Amazing

"I love the style of writing and I hope the story won't stop soon... "

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