Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Knocked The Slippers Off My Flippers

"The way this was done makes it seem like it was exactly as it was supposed to be. And I loved how you made each of the sisters stand out in the plot. Ariel's Beginning kind of tried to do this, but honestly, I think you did it better. I loved how you incorporates Ariel into the story without making her key or too showy to drive away from the main plot. Honestly, I think you could do a whole saga of these. Maybe you could try... Sleeping Beauty with Snow White? Beauty and the Beast with Frozen? Okay, I'll let you be the genius. Or don't. But this was quite a treat that just felt like, as I said, this was how the original story went. It fits together so perfectly it's crazy! You breathed new life into old characters, like Adella and Ariel, and incorporated awesome new ones, like Ellie. Well done."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation