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Good,really good,❤️

"Really good❤️"

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Amazing!

"I LOVE this story! I fell in love so quickly with all of the characters because they are so sweet and understanding. This is an incredible book! "

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Aphrodite

"Despite the grammatical and errors I enjoyed reading this story. I liked the story plot and how it had a smooth flow to it. Great job and keep up the good work!"

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omg

"it’s so good omg i’m so attached "

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book p0rn omg lmao im dying of laughter

"Omg keep up the good work! You have so much potential! I love this book"

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Love this!!!!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

"I love this story so much!!!!😭😍😍😍😍 "

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Aphrodite

"I loved it so much "

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It is beautiful.love it

" It's beautiful exciting and romantic Love it Anticipation Intense Great Funny Amazed Drama Relatable to characters Nice So proud Great story "

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"sigh" happiness

"i Absolutely loved this story and sad that there aren't anymore chapters yet but i look foward to future updates"

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Beautiful

"Amazing please complete the story"

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Lots to say

"I REALLY enjoyed reading this. The plot overall was great and the Irina plot twist was completely unexpected. I loved that this story isn't just a cookie cutter love story however, I have some complaints. Ace and Aphrodite did not really have many moments. I love Aphrodite and she seems like a real person but Ace does not have any substance. I don't know anything about Ace except for the fact that he uses the word "baby" way to much. I just wish the beginning of their relationship was more elaborate and stretched throughout multiple chapters. I feel this way for almost all the relationships in this story. There was no proper development and there were no moments where the characters seemed to truly connect, but that's just my opinion. Thank you author for a great story that saved me from my boredom 👻( ◜‿◝ )♡"

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Great story

"I love the story but there is a lot if grammar errors and repetition of words. Maybe try revising before updating."

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