What is your opinion?
Amazing story, but need some revisions
"As I said, very very good, but a lot of mistakes. Ill write a full review because Im really loving it and see an amazing future for the writer. The whole idea, storyline and the way its developing is amazing. The peeps: Our heroine is very well described and has an amazing personality, I really like her. She is almost flawless. Our handsome vampire makes me a little confused, his behavior is quite bipolar I'd say. I'm still trying to decide if he is a bad boy, an old dark vampire (as firstly described) or a young man in love. Despite that, he is very funny and sorta sexy. I just loooove all the side characters. They are very captivating and we can feel their personalities as we read. The story: Guys, the way the story starts is a piece of art, the way the writer describes the scenes make you see a movie going through your brain. I have absolute nothing to say but what I just had. The only thing that kills the mood a bit is my next topic. There's so many mistakes and wrong punctuations that sometime I have to read twice to make sure I didn't get something wrong. A lot of "," where shouldn't, "." Missing, tons of affirmative sentences ending with "?". Not to mention some "there" where should be a "their" and the same goes on with were/where. So, to make it short, have someone to review the grammar and you can easily publish this book. Best wishes, <3"
The inbetween
"Love this book! I can't seem to put it down! Definitely a new look on the supernatural romance genre, which is refreshing! Definitely worth a read! "
The In Between
"Second novel I'm giving a go and not disappointed (early days but I can already tell this will be a winner). The prologue and first chapter promises a riveting tale. Can't wait!"
The in between
"I loved the plot I just kept reading all the chapters. I didn’t like the spelling and punctuation. It reminded me that a young girl was writing this so it kinda took away from it "
