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Again, My Fellow Malec Lover,

"I may have decided to read everything you've written. Oops, not sorry. Anyway, I really like this one too. Again, the plot's incredibly interesting and I'm eagerly waiting for Magnus to make his sexy appearance but still enjoying everything leading up to that. I'm guessing you're from Australia or somewhere in Europe based on the kind of language you use and I actually find it really interesting to read that. There were a few grammatical/spelling errors and some sticky sentences here and there, but that's easy to fix by doing a quick little edit of the chapter :) Basically, I can't wait for an update!"

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