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Stay

"Really enjoyed reading your story 😎👍🖤💜🖤🖤"

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Stay❤️

"I have read this amazing story now for the second time, and I have enjoyed it just as much as the first time. I highly recommend this story to everyone on Inkitt.❤️"

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Stay

"I am speechless. This story is amazingggg! 100% recommend reading🫶"

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Dylan the best

"I love the character Dylan. Beautiful love story. Author ❤❤"

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Stsy

"This is very good i highly recommend😍😍"

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It's so so so gooood

"I liked it To my friends "

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I love this story

"Loving the story... Can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work author. We love you❤❤❤"

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Amazing story ❤

"The story was really good 👍 "

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Home

"I loved this book it was very nice and I loved the writers use of language and words and the characters in the book"

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It's great

"It a great book that is written it has content and context and the story line it's just great in general I love the book it's really enticing and exciting."

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home is where the heart is

"You have definitely showed us where Dylan's heart and home is, just how you wrote it is difficult. Not all of us could read french and your grammar, and punctuation was distracting for me. But it is really good thank you"

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Home

"I enjoyed this immensely. It was great and ended far too soon for me, but from a technical viewpoint exactly right. Always keep your audience hanging for more, well done. "

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Home

"It's a nice change from the usual billionaire love story"

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I want more this got me hooked

"The is amazing but that end it not it "

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This story is really good and probly the only one I can read in this app. I mostly stick to wattpad

"I disliked how it changed form third person to first person"

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Home

"The story is great ☺️. I love the characters and the writing style. Dylan is a smol bean and I just love the idea behind the story. The grammar could be corrected but other than that it is a wonderful story"

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Home

"Dylan is such a cute potato. I can't wait to see where this story is going!"

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Home

"This book is really well done. The main character is so well-written, and the writing style is pretty good. There are several grammar mistakes, and the pronouns are all mixed up in several places, but it's easy to correct those in your head and keep reading. A few of the characters seem shallow, but it feels like there's still lots to be revealed and plenty of development to come. I highly suggest reading this, and it's fairly short so it doesn't take long, but it leaves you with long-lasting happiness."

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Interesting

"I absolutely love Dylan's character, how he just doesn't know much about anything, how he's just really confused. It's as if he's a new born baby dropped off into school. His role and how the author brings it across is pretty effective and it makes the story a whole lot better and funnier. I honestly would recommend this story to any and everyone, that is if they aren't homophobic. An amazing book. Well written. Very funny. And absolutely intriguing."

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