Short, sweet, and meloncholy

"Without You, by Ciyaaa is a work in progress telling a sad story about the death of a beloved friend through cyberbullying. The story is relayed through the prose of a poem, detailing a gradual decline, and that best friend drifting away, becoming distant, and dying by degrees before it actually happens. I found this to be a fascinating way to tell a story. I believe this author has talent that should be nurtured and encouraged. I enjoyed reading Without You. There is a genuine softness and dreamlike quality to it all despite how sad the subject matter is. I had the impression of water colors in the form of words while reading through it. I can imagine, from the sincerity of the work, it must be a subject near and dear to the author's heart. While not perfect, it is a short and heartfelt read. I recommend giving it a chance. I hope Ciyaaa continues to work on and refine this piece."