Diving right in.

"Really refreshing to start a story that just jumps right into it. Please, keep it up. With only 7 pages, I'm leaving with many questions in mind. There is no filler to this story. Only meat to the plot is strictly served up to the reader, which keeps the story moving. Without providing any spoilers, I cant imagine how deep my heart would sink if that certain someone showed up at my house following the events of the previous night! Looking forward to what the person has to say....."