Interesting fanfic

"I had mixed feelings about this story. I really liked the emotional quality that it had, but I think that it needs a little work. I didn't know this was Pokémon fanfiction until about halfway through. I think that you need more of a description of setting so that the reader can relate more to the story. Also, I think that you should reformat the part where he is having the flashback. It might be better if you take out the italics and lead in by saying something along the lines of... "My mind drifted back to the night of the fight". That sort of thing. I think it's got real potential! I loved the song! Good work!"