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Great

"The story is compelling. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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"I'm actually a huge fan of every word in it, thanks to the writer. I suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition this April."

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Review

"So far this book is interesting I haven’t come across what to dislike yet"

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Excellent

"Excellent story I hope to see more from you! "

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Wizard

"I like the whole concept writing style plot everything. I gave this rating because I feel it deserved it . I would like to recommend it to my friends ."

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Wizard

"I so love this story and it make me happy whenever I'm reading it. Thanks for very much author such a wonderful story."

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Wizard troy sanders book 1

"Good read. I would surely love a lot more world building and more details on their school life. "

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Wizard

"I liked basically everythig in the book. I think everything except for some grammar was perfect."

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Love the book

"Love this book. It wasn't so cliché and the plot wasn't going to fast or slow. It was worth reading it👍🏻"

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Wizard

"I read it from start to finish without putting it down,"

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Wizard

"It was a we'll thought out story that kept me enthralled till the end I honestly didn't think it need any changing the characterization was thought out loved the crazy girl and fast pace story made you feel like the character I'm ADHD so it felt personal too me like you understood what being real is like adding in the disability and bullying reminded me of what school was like I think you nailed it can't wait to read the next one."

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Wizard

"I have always enjoyed books that dealt with magic and this one is interesting, creative, and well wrote."

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First read

"The story was very good but everything moved along too quickly. It would have been nice if the chapters were longer and the relationships developed more slowly. It would have been nice as well if more background was given on main characters. Perhaps information on the difference between light and dark magic could have been explained and more in depth information on school and families. "

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Just amazing!!

"Great story! Had me hooked. Love the writing style"

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WIZARD

" FANTASTIC Book!!! I enjoyed this book very much. It is well thought out, well written with a great plotline. The characters are loveable and memorable. The story flowed perfectly. I was enthralled from the very beginning and stayed enthralled the whole way thru. It takes a talented and skilled writer to enthrall a reader and to keep them that way. I look forward to reading more. Thank You for a most excellent adventure."

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Review

"I like how you improved the book from last time and made it even better "

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Wizard

"I will recommend this to my bestfriend because she also likes to read fantasy books and about magics. I choose to rate it like this for I like it very much. Thank you, more power to the writer. God bless you."

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Sander's loss and gained

"I like everything about this story its plot, everything"

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Exemplary

"I like the story... Recommend highly to all ages... I want to continue reading until the end if it is possrble"

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Wizard hi

"Short, precise, straight to the point and interesting 😎"

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