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Creepy

"One has to love the epic battle between science and the supernatural. The protagonist struggles with accepting a potential side of reality that rejects his beliefs. It was great to read accurate facts regarding psychological disorders, showing a good amount of research went into writing this. I love that the subplot merged nicely with the main plot as it added a subtle emotional touch. It also emphasized the theme of loneliness. Unfortunately, the conclusion came across as weak in comparison to the overall story. Perhaps if another paragraph was added to expand on the message, it could've been stronger. This is why I rate the overall story as 3 but don't let that stop you from reading as the majority is well written and enticing."

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