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"Tea, Cakes and Bones"
"Baby Rodent, good story, plot is well achieved and your creativity is amazingly bright and spellbinding....the only comment now, would be editing for punctuation, and grammar. other than that, a fine story........keep writing, with your imagination, you will be very successful.......................william elliott kern Please review my book; https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550 Dead or Alive............when reading, question if the main character is dreaming, real, or if its the last 3mill a seconds left in the brain, before death comes, and darkness falls..........."
Fun Short Story
"It took a great imagination to write this very enjoyable and fun short story."
