Inkitt
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Never follow up or keep up update

"It’s disappointing how an author don’t take their commitment serious. Waste of peoples time and the author time. Unfortunately it is a very nice story but the lack of updates made people lose interest in the story."

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Good book

"Oooh I'm scared for her"

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Lethal

"Exciting and intriguing and interestingly touching pls next chapters "

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Good story

"She reminds me of Gabrielle some!!! Love the story. Wonder if he is jealous of morris. There should be a scene to prove this."

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A-MAZING

"It is very captivating and slow burn"

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hilarylinde55

"Very interesting. Good read. I just could not wait for the next chapter. Enjoyed it. "

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Hooked up

"Lethal, as the name suggests. Deep dark desires and really well-written story. The length of chapters is really good making it worth reading. I hope you update soon! "

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Tweet

"I like the story line . Very interesting! "

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Lethal

"Very interesting where can I find the update of this story"

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Lethal

"Love this book..the plot is different and unpredictable..love love"

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Jusstttt fantastic ...this is. I can say .. love ya

"Very very nice story. The plot was famous ...one cannot tell whts going to happen next ....just hats off to the writer ...love ya ...keep writing "

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Lethal

"Absolutely loved it I can't wait to read more! So much more to Dean then meets the eye! It all goes back to his childhood. He loved his mother and hated his father!? Where are they now I can't wait to read more. "

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The mafia and the innocent

"I dislike how the writer doesn't mention the sister and I cannot recommend to anyone cause it alitle bit slow"

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It's really nice and interesting

"I like maria and dean I think they are gonna fall in love with each other cause its seems like no matter what maria does dean will always love maria but he won't say it"

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Lethal

"This is a dark story so if you’re into a bit of violence this is for you. Reading it is like seeing a movie 🎥 like I had commented previously Dean’s character feels very realistic to his violent traits. The author does not drag the story and writes long juicy updates. Thank you for sharing your stories with us ;)"

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Really good

"Soo good book🥰 "

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Lethal

"Love this story very much your story is unique. Something new for me. She s so alone with him but still has spirit in her to fight him she won't give up easily"

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Awesome

"Amazing plot of a story, liked it and would going to recommend to my few people who would actually atleast go through an intro mentioned by me.. Let's see keep up the work good going! "

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Lethal

"I rated as per my preference "

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Great job

"Great job on the story line and the plot "

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