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An interesting twis from the movie

"The movie was one of my top favourites, and your story brought a good twist to it. I've always wished more for Kushi, like yes ofc she had the love of her life, but maybe something on the side (like other achievements) would be great :3 love this twist"

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Great writing

"Thank u so much for completing this story, your writing skill is so fabulous, so keep it on. Waiting for the New story hope you will start it soon."

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Beautiful

"Beautiful story ❤️ ♥️ 💕 😍 💖 💗 "

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Awesome

"Good writing loved it ❤️"

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Good going

"Felt the plot tied you to read more"

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An amazing story...

"I like the way their bonding moulded from a complete hate relationship to love relationship.. from contract to heart.... From strangers in a room to lovers in a room... The title is completely apt to this story "journey towards their love". I am eagerly waiting to read further that why anjali left shyam,Dhruv/ lavanya's impending relationship and aman / Naina's impending lovestory... Update soon..."

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Good

"It was awesome "

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Wow

"Love it ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😘😘😘"

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Very Interesting

"Not sure what to say but suspense is very interesting "

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Journey towards Love

"I really Like this story of our Arshi. So well written. You are so talented Dear. This story is such a refreshing concept. Can’t wait to read further. "

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Superb

"Awesome update "

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Luvindia

"Good story"

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Awesome update.

"I just have started loving this story. Just a request that you update it often. It’s too irritating to wait for long 😌 please it’s a request. This story is way too interesting. Waiting for their progress in falling in love with each other. Though I have a feel it’s a long way to go. But Thanks for writing. 🙂🙃"

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Excellent

"Why aren't you updating this beautiful story, its been 6 months impatiently waiting gor you to come back to hive us zn update? I hope u r doing well healthwise emotionally anx physically. Take care. Impatiently waiting for the next update. Please update soon. Take care."

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Good track

"Please update soon waiting eagerly"

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Awesome start

"Awesome start nice "

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Awesome

"Awesome superb excellent amazing waiting for more "

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Intresting

"Intresting dear looking forward dear "

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Love journey

"Oho kahani me twist, thanks.for the nice update & now eagerly waiting for.next as usual."

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Arshi

"Nice story. Well done. Awaiting future stories. Small tip: proof read the story before final submit. There were very few errors which was easily noticed whole reading. Can be corrected. Well done and all the best. "

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