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Smoke on the horizon

"This is one of the best fanfiction i have read. The plot is original, The writing is grammatically correct overall a very good fanfic. I would just like to suggest posting this fic to other sites like fanfiction.net and ao3 too, As i am reading fanfiction for a very long time and it's the first time i have come to this site. Those are huge platform and the more known; you will get much more audience and appriciation for your work. Keep writing"

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