What is your opinion?
Review
"Nice I enjoyed d book can wait to see how it ends"
Amazing!
"Amazing! Keep it up! "
Halfwizard
"It's a really good story and the type I search for reading that is fantasy and it was even great that it was a trilogy ....like the more the merrier . I would really like to recommend it to my friends. "
Halfwizard
"Great read. I just wish there were developments scenes. It feels like every chapter is a climax! "
Epic bonus
"Hope you're going to have another series with Stan as the main character after the next book."
Halfwizard
"The story is entertaining, well thought out, and interesting. The characters and their emotions are believable. I truly enjoy reading these stories. "
HALFWIZARD
"Another FANTASTIC Book! I enjoyed this story as much if not more than the first one. I love everything about this book. It was just as well thought out and well written as the first one. The story flowed perfectly (don't listen to anyone who may say differently). I love the characters (although Vic can be a little mean and annoying). It takes a very skilled and talented writer to spin such fantastic stories. As cheesy as as it may sound...I AM a fan. I definitely look forward to reading the next in this series of books. Thank YOU for another excellent adventure."
Decent story, good enough to keep reading.
"Plot was ok, characters were better than in the first book, though you should still add more on a rewrite(though compared to the first book this was three times better - referring to secondary chars here in case you missed it). Grammar and semantics better than the first book, and didn't stumble on them too much - nothing a good editor can't fix. My BIG problem was Troy's evolution - it's not smooth, feels like it spikes all the time, it's not even explained/justified properly. The thing is it feels like the book should have been a lot longer with normal, every day occurrences like going to class and stuff. You need to take more care with the passing of time - how it happens, how you explain it and how you marked it. I hope you take this constructively - if I didn't like it/care about your writing, I would not have bothered leaving the review. Cheers!"
