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"Good so far can’t wait to finish it"

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Masters of perfection and seduction

"Can you up date this please? I want to find out what happens next x"

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Lol I love this story

"Great story. Glad I read it."

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So far so good

"Looking forward for next updates!!!"

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❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

"❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ "

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Hott

"This is going to be a good series "

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Masters of perfection and seduction

"I'm dying to read more! Is that deviant ex going to kidnap Trinity? Are the other guys in the house going to share Trinity? Is she going be with all of them? Please update soon"

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Master of perfection and seduction

"Perfect plot. Looking forward to the next chapters."

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Love it

"Love it cant wait for updates "

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Kim

"Good so far"

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Finished???

"Where’s the rest of the story?"

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Trinity

"Loving it. "

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Enjoy

"Enjoy the read"

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Short and sweet

"Could do with more chapters as it's just getting good"

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Masters of perfection and seduction

"So far so good. Waiting for more. "

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Master of sin

"I'm on pins and needles, holding my breath, will he find her, will he protect her, has she feelings for him???????Help!!!!!! "

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Read it B4 on different colored paper

"It feels a lot like reading Wildfire again, characters are uncanningly similar, same sassy humour from the female lead same spanking scenes even the lead Dom is the same as Sal but without the accent. Not to mention the plot really? The virgin, I think once you've had 4 large male fingers fucking you your hymen is history, And the ex boyfriend plot again? It's like watching a remake of the same show in a different country. Sorry for being so harsh but you're not doing yourself any favours by rewriting the same story with the odd change here and there on different colored paper. Time to get those creative juices flowing spank your muse for being lazy and take us on a new journey. Good luck."

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