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Who's That Girl?

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Summary

This is a mysterious story about a boy named Andy who believes his new classmate may be his dead friend.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
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Age Rating
13+

The New Girl

Hey, my name is Andy and I just moved away from my old town, we had to move because of my moms job, I still haven't adjusted to my new school mostly because everyone at my new school dislikes me a lot because my mom is famous for her big company and they think I'm probably gonna be stuck up and entitled. I just want friends but everyone ignores me, until one day a mysterious new girl appeared at school one day, she looks very similar to an old friend of mine who sadly died in a house fire three months before i had to move away. I was stuck there stunned thinking "Could that be Bella?" Bella was my bff and we both where extremely upset when we both found out I would be moving far away, we where both in her kitchen spending time together because I was moving soon. Both of us where trying to cook some food but we ended up starting a house fire, I managed to escape but before she could get out a piece of would fell from the ceiling in front of the front door, she was surrounded by fire. Bella couldn't get out in time and burned to death in her house, I was traumatized to this day I still can't believe shes really gone. "Hello class! Welcome back! Today we have a new student! Now class be nice to her. Please come in! Introduce yourself sweetheart!" The teacher Mrs.Ema is always so excited about everything, that same girl from earlier was my new classmate! "Hello, my name is Bella and I hope we can all be friends." "Oh my god. Could it really be her?! Seriously I'm freaking out!" Andy thought to himself while he sat in silence. "Bella could you go sit next to that boy with the very dark brown hair over there? His name is Andy I hope you to get along because you two will be sitting next to each other for the whole school year!" Mrs.Ema exclaimed. "Alright ma'am." Bella politely said to Mrs.Ema. Bella came over and sat down next to me and Mrs.Ema started the lesson.

End Of Chapter One.
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1. The New Girl
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Great but the humans should have been eggs :3

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