suggestions

"Hi I really liked the story I love how you were kind of dropping hints and not giving away everything. Because these types of book get me hooked on the plot, wanting to know what will happen next and trying to resolve the mystery behind her parents murder, who did it, what's going to happen to Emma after that letter... So I suggest you keep up with that but I would also recommend doing a filler chapter where you go enlighten us a bit on what she did those two years and how she is handling her life since she dropped out of school (just a suggestion) and I loved your writing but I honestly believe you can give your best and make this book a big hit. Other than that I'm waiting for the update and good luck"