What is your opinion?
Has potential needs work feels rushed and unfinished
"The overall idea and plot is interesting. The book timeliness is rushed and confusing. It feels like parts are left out or missing. It also seems to have ALOT of clichés that take away from overall plot/idea. There are quiet a few spelling and grammar mistakes as well. The book would be better cleaned up, plot and characters were fleshed out a bit more, and had a cliche or two removed. I enjoy reading it but becomes predictable and with the missing parts leaves me wanting more info on characters, their pasts, and their current situations."