8 chapters read
this story is amazing!!!❤️❤️
"love that it has every detail and it's so beautifully written "
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11 chapters read
Forever His
"A little too gory but liked it over all."
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13 chapters read
Poor girl
"Good case of Stockholm syndrome "
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7 chapters read
Never his
"Did not make it to ForeverHis because she’s escape 😅 The story end just like that. I wish there is continuation of the story. I love it though it’s very short story. Thank you "
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10 chapters read
Only saw trailer on utube. Cant find story.
"Wheres the story at?"
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13 chapters read
Awesome
"The characters are amazing!! I just wish the Elijah was a sweet and romantic "
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14 chapters read
Book
"Interesting book"
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13 chapters read
Mmmm
"Hhhjjjkkmmmm"
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12 chapters read
Mafia
"Good writing"
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13 chapters read
Wow
"So far so good "
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0 chapters read
Great book!!!
"Great reading..........."
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13 chapters read
Nice
"I like the strength try Shannon shows"
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13 chapters read
Supop
"Thanks author"
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8 chapters read
It's fine 🙂 🙃
" I don't like how the author doesn't narrate and describe the sex scenes the author just passes and on to a new chapter "
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13 chapters read
Mafia girl
"It is a good quick read"
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14 chapters read
Cannot think about it
"A strong story line is needed"
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11 chapters read
so so
"story is good "
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13 chapters read
You can do better
"I have read similar stories, l think you need to improve your writing style, Give your characters more personality, l think you can make it as a published author."
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13 chapters read
It was ok
"It was ok didn’t really like it much at the end."
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13 chapters read
Bad boy
"The story is too short...."
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