Inkitt
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this story is amazing!!!❤️❤️

"love that it has every detail and it's so beautifully written "

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Forever His

"A little too gory but liked it over all."

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Poor girl

"Good case of Stockholm syndrome "

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Never his

"Did not make it to ForeverHis because she’s escape 😅 The story end just like that. I wish there is continuation of the story. I love it though it’s very short story. Thank you "

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Only saw trailer on utube. Cant find story.

"Wheres the story at?"

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Awesome

"The characters are amazing!! I just wish the Elijah was a sweet and romantic "

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Book

"Interesting book"

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Mmmm

"Hhhjjjkkmmmm"

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Mafia

"Good writing"

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Wow

"So far so good "

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Great book!!!

"Great reading..........."

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Nice

"I like the strength try Shannon shows"

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Supop

"Thanks author"

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It's fine 🙂 🙃

" I don't like how the author doesn't narrate and describe the sex scenes the author just passes and on to a new chapter "

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Mafia girl

"It is a good quick read"

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Cannot think about it

"A strong story line is needed"

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so so

"story is good "

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You can do better

"I have read similar stories, l think you need to improve your writing style, Give your characters more personality, l think you can make it as a published author."

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It was ok

"It was ok didn’t really like it much at the end."

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Bad boy

"The story is too short...."

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