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Missing/wrong comma punctuated

"Missing a lot of commas, and commas in the wrong places," Hey gramma(,) hey papa" or "Gramma(,)papa" Though, overall, this is really good. Also, commas not supposed to be after the end quotes For example "Hey Gramma, Hey papa. I'm heading out!"(,)"

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