Inkitt
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Imperfect world more like perfect book

"I loved everything. love the story the plot how it keeps you guessing. i love your work donny! Keep it up <3 I really do suggest this !!"

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Good Story

"Some of it feels a little rushed and I think it would benefit from adding more inner monologue, emotions/feelings. How the MC perceives the world around him, not just how the world is. But still, I’m hooked."

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Great

"Very cash money."

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