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More Please
"Great job capturing the characters. Good style. Believable story and plot and good use of punctuation and grammar to make your point. Please write more - especially in this vein. "
Loved
"I really liked this. It was cute, sweet, and adorable. All of the boys and Haruhi were portrayed greatly, and I would defiantly read more."
Cute!
"I liked this story! It was very cute and believable. None of the characters were out of character. In fact, I like that Haruhi wore her glasses. I wish she'd have done that more considering she said she hated contacts. I could see Haruhi acting like this and I could totally see the boys doing something like this randomly while at school. :)"
