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Burning embers in the wind

"The first thing, i love the name choice of the author. It is very captivating. Secondly when you start reading, it really had me hooked. there were some points when i got a little confused but the story is incredible. I love your work."

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Totally loved it

"It's insanely well written, on par with most famous writers out there so kudos to that. I also love the whole scenery you set up and she system of being s concubine. I can imagine this being an actual thing back in the day "

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