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Aynsefian

"I'd recommend this book to anyone who likes science fiction. The interesting characters and exciting plot, drew me in, right away."

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Such joy

"So this is my own novel and inn re-reading it 2 years after it was competed. It's really joyous, doing so. It's not perfect: there are typos and some plot threads are not totally fleshed out. That said, it's such as joy, this novel. I may write my third novel soon. I forgot how much I loved doing this at the time. I hope others will get to read it some day :-) "

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Captivating and well-written

"I would like to start off by saying that I love the setting of the story. The description of everything was clear and wholesome. This was error-free and well-edited. I like the plots and the characterisation of the characters. Thus, I would give this novel a five-star rating. No readers would want to miss this book!"

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Very interesting

"I Ioved the story so far. .... I planning to complete this soon. Very different plot. I really loved it....👌👌👌👌👌"

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Aynsefian

"Interesting story. The characters are authentic and believable, the description easy to imagine. I also like the idea of the blurring of lines between persons and AI. Maybe that's how it will work. I am eager to see where this will lead. But I am so sorry there is only sixty more pages to go. I would like more"

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"I really like the way you've set this out! I like the different ships logs and things like that, it's super intriguing! The story and the characters seem super interesting so far, I'm very excited to see where it goes! "

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Good story line

"Good plot, but too much redundant details."

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