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Well written good read

"Good plot and development of throughout leads to a well constructed story that's an enjoyable read."

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Good read!

"I'm not a nice critique, so don't judge me too tough. Overall -- this is a good, light read. It flows easy, so the reader can smoothly dive into the story. Plot/story details ('ll try to avoid spoilers): The ship is described really well -- and it works, it feels old in a convincing way. The plot itself is not overly complicated and it serves the purpose. Personally, though, it felt a little predictable for me. Since it isn't hard sci-fi the details are fine, and some of the ideas are nicely presented."

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