Absolutely Wonderful!

"The plot was amazing, the details and use of language was absolutely wonderful and amazingly vivid! You can feel the narrator's pain and as a reader my heart broke in agony with the narrator's. One thing I'd recommend is that you stay in the past tense. A few times you switched from past to present, but other than, your writing is absolutely incredible! I love the ending, and I'd be super ecstatic if you decided to write more! I NEED to know what happened! I just hate cliffhangers and surprises! Well done on this first chapter!!!"