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"The writing style is not exactly my favorite. But to each their own. When writing, there are some numbers that are meant to be written out, then there are others that are meant to be shown. Some of the plot seems to be jerked from time to time. I'd like to know a little more about Braiden and his relationship with Nyko and Krystle. A little more description is needed in some characters but other than that; The story is beautiful and passionate. There is a lot of character development and then couples that have been paired together are sweet. They work very well. "

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