What is your opinion?
silence
"The story starts with fire revealing the banter back and forth between two unlikely characters. The added comedy between Sen-sai and Jon only melded the story, wonderful touch. The mystery around Atlas sadly builds to a blank wall, but ends in an erotic orgasmic ending. Beautifully written. I look forward to living in your world again. Thank you for sharing."
Jenk
"A good story with some unexpexpected twists and what a crazy humouress family. Good to se e the closing chapter a little further than I expected"
Silence (Complete Edition)
"Fell in love with the characters early on because I could connect with most in some way. Even if I simply knew someone that behaves like them, I would feel connected to them. Genuinely fun to read and I had no issues following the story. A few grammar errors towards the end but I'm sure you've noticed them already or they've been pointed out to you. Let's talk about the elephant in the room, the main character's relationship. By talk about it, I mean let me just clarify some things. First, a relationship between two consenting adults isn't an issue. Second, teacher and student relationships are not illegal and there are actually rules to allow said relationships to take place (seriously, Google it.) Finally, just because you may not agree with something personally, doesn't make it wrong or "disturbing" as another reviewer so eloquently put it. To think, some smooth-brained harlequins out there think forcing their worldviews on someone because they wrote something they don't agree with is ok. That's so wild to me but I digress... All in all, great story. Very eager to see what you produce next."
Love
"I love this book "
CAPTIVATING...
"This book so far is captivating with storylines I hope will lead to another book. As for now I'm impatiently awaiting the next chapter. 🤔 🤗 😩 "
Silence
"I really enjoy it and got me emotional too💘 I recommend this book to read Mistery amd Romance🥰 I love it"
Lovely story
"I love the fact that we cant predict what happens ect"
Silence
"Your story really had me captivated. So much mystery with the characters history, looking forward to your updates!💖"
Silence
"Soooooo, Is Mr.Chairman, "father" going to pisss me off??😑 I guess we'll find out in the other chapters but just know I already don't like him🙄🙄. I'm invested!"
Silence by DAME
"I must say, a very good introduction from this writer. From the start the words draw you in. Then as you get a glimpse of the characters your curiosity deepens. You can't wait to know more about them & what intrigue the author has weaved for them. I also love the carefree easy flowing style of the writer. I have a simmering anticipation of the rest of this story. Is the next chapter out soon? Thank you to the author for sharing their work freely. Chief Woodloon."
Atlas
"Really enjoying this story, looking forward to how it's all going to tie up. "
Well written, disturbing content
"Lovely cover, but then I got to the description and realised what this was...and I’m not happy with it because these relationships are wrong, predatory, and illegal, and they shouldn’t be being made romantic. If it was that they were both older and got together after the student finished school then it wouldn’t be as bad, unusual but if they can prove nothing happened while they were still student and teacher ok. I did read on however because I can still give feedback on other parts of the story. The word ‘silence’ at the start of chapter one needs to have a lowercase ‘s’ even if it is the title. There is some problems with commas at the end of speech not being there and it all being full stops, some need to be commas if the conversation is on going and a full stop when it ends. Ms. silver should be Ms Silver. There are also a few times when you put commas at the bed of sentences between speech when they should be full stops and where you start speech with a lowercase letter when it should be capital. It isn’t clear which character the story POV is from, and we don’t learn much about them. Your chapters are a good size, and the story moves at a good pace. Rich kids, I swear - I think needs more detail. Swear what? Normalcy would be better as normality. I think some more detail in the descriptions of settings to help set the scens. In chapter 4, there needs to be a space in the speech ‘Just Atlas,Sensai,’. Also, it is unclear if the story’s pov changes between characters, that needs to be established better. The line ‘Staggering backwards I rub my forehead, looking up...’ would be better as ‘Staggering backwards I rubbed my forehead before looking up.’ - you need to get your tenses right too as you go into present here when the majority of it has been in past tense. The characters don’t have Japanese names, yet this story is set in Japan? I think adding some would make it more believable. Overall this story is written well, there are some mistakes that can be easily fixed, but the romanticisation of a very wrong relationship is not okay and reading about it was very uncomfortable."
