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silence

"The story starts with fire revealing the banter back and forth between two unlikely characters. The added comedy between Sen-sai and Jon only melded the story, wonderful touch. The mystery around Atlas sadly builds to a blank wall, but ends in an erotic orgasmic ending. Beautifully written. I look forward to living in your world again. Thank you for sharing."

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Jenk

"A good story with some unexpexpected twists and what a crazy humouress family. Good to se e the closing chapter a little further than I expected"

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Silence (Complete Edition)

"Fell in love with the characters early on because I could connect with most in some way. Even if I simply knew someone that behaves like them, I would feel connected to them. Genuinely fun to read and I had no issues following the story. A few grammar errors towards the end but I'm sure you've noticed them already or they've been pointed out to you. Let's talk about the elephant in the room, the main character's relationship. By talk about it, I mean let me just clarify some things. First, a relationship between two consenting adults isn't an issue. Second, teacher and student relationships are not illegal and there are actually rules to allow said relationships to take place (seriously, Google it.) Finally, just because you may not agree with something personally, doesn't make it wrong or "disturbing" as another reviewer so eloquently put it. To think, some smooth-brained harlequins out there think forcing their worldviews on someone because they wrote something they don't agree with is ok. That's so wild to me but I digress... All in all, great story. Very eager to see what you produce next."

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Love

"I love this book "

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CAPTIVATING...

"This book so far is captivating with storylines I hope will lead to another book. As for now I'm impatiently awaiting the next chapter. 🤔 🤗 😩 "

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Silence

"I really enjoy it and got me emotional too💘 I recommend this book to read Mistery amd Romance🥰 I love it"

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Lovely story

"I love the fact that we cant predict what happens ect"

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Silence

"Your story really had me captivated. So much mystery with the characters history, looking forward to your updates!💖"

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Silence

"Soooooo, Is Mr.Chairman, "father" going to pisss me off??😑 I guess we'll find out in the other chapters but just know I already don't like him🙄🙄. I'm invested!"

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Silence by DAME

"I must say, a very good introduction from this writer. From the start the words draw you in. Then as you get a glimpse of the characters your curiosity deepens. You can't wait to know more about them & what intrigue the author has weaved for them. I also love the carefree easy flowing style of the writer. I have a simmering anticipation of the rest of this story. Is the next chapter out soon? Thank you to the author for sharing their work freely. Chief Woodloon."

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Atlas

"Really enjoying this story, looking forward to how it's all going to tie up. "

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