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The structural silence

"Apart from a few wrong words and past and present tense the actual story and characters I cannot fault shame I've got to follow and go on their page to finish reading, it just complicates things and then I get disinterested"

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Is Pinn so different?

"Love the story and the women’s rights thread ... can’t wait till book 2!!"

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open commission

"Hi I hope you are doin well and I reached out to you bec I read your story and like it so much and have dope ideas for your story related to artwork in good commission so I hope you are interested to hear. are you? Btw are you going to update more? Social Handle : Discord: murphy_adam09 Instagram: murphy_adam08 Portfolio : DA : murphyadam809 Twitter :@Murphyadam09 More inquiry : Gmail : Murphyadam809 I can't wait to hear your good response"

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Good stuff

"Very well written Romance with Alien World politics, Male vs Female Rights…very interesting."

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Great book

"I like reading your book"

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"I loved it, and I think they are must read. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar."

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Well

"This book is well thought out as well as being well written. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Couldn’t stop reading

"This story is unique, captivating and well crafted. The characters are authentic, and relatable (in Ivy’s case). It was so refreshing to read a story were the main character did not readily accept her new situation in life and fall in love with her capture. I read this start to finish in a matter of hours. I cannot wait to see what is next for Ivy and Giddean and a whole cast of other characters whose intentions are still unknown. Highly recommend to anyone who is looking for a well-written story with an intriguing premise. To the author, thank you for all your hard work, stories like this don’t just come together overnight. "

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The Structural Silence

"I love the interesting and original plot. When reading this story the hook got me... hooked😝. It was and is amazing."

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The structural silence

"I really loved the plot and everything about this novel 😊 I really enjoyed it The author really has some talent 🤗"

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True perfection

"This story is the best in all manners. I love the setting, and everything is so unique about it. It doesn’t shy away from serious topics. So well written, all characters feel true and real, and all add to the plot. I love the different interactions and the mystery behind certain information, it fits right into the story and makes it more reflecting on real life as well. Maybe that’s why I find it so unique because it reflects so much on real life, feeling like a hopeful ending to a tragic setting is earned for women at this point but this book series doesn’t hush-hush about the hard truth!! I’m reading the second book already and waiting every Friday for the update! Thank you so much for this read! 🙏 ☺️ "

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Structural Silence Book 1

"What an interesting and great read. I am so looking forward to book 2. There were several phrases that needed some editing, however, that is just my opinion. I think you are a great writer. I am looking forward to book 2. Kudos "

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The

"Cant stop reading! Love the story!"

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Unstructured silence

"It's just fucking brilliant,,,,,, hve enjoyed it so much! 👌😍"

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The structual silence

"I really enjoyed this story ,the thought that mabee this could happen only intriguing my imagination to wonder how i would react to this situation . Cant wait to read book two"

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A gem

"Just found this story and I love it!!!"

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Structural silence

"I had a hard time putting this story down I never thought I would like a story like this and I kept telling myself to just look for another story but I just get myself to put this book down"

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The structural silence

"Amazing writing kept my interest throughout the whole book can't wait for book 2. Thanks Heather great story."

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The structural silence

"Love the plot, characters,etc..... The grammar and the spelling! definately need work but its not bad enough that it cant be overlooked . I only hope that the entire novel is here and i can finish this fun story. MUCH thanks to the Author "

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The Structural Silence

"It's something completely new to me. Life between Pinns and humans. It's so interesting....... I don't want to stop reading. "

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