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Song of the Siren

"I love it. I'd like to find out what happens to Malcolm and the Siren. "

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More please

"The balance between under/above water was cool, I want more about the world that worships underwater gods, plus the ship romance has yet to find legs! More please!"

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Mermen Revisited

"The world-building will draw you right into this one. A hidden people of the sea, hunt, kill, and worship all without notice of the above water people. With a research station operating in the hidden deep, that might not remain true for long. Interested to see where this story goes. The author's writing style has definitely won me over."

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Mermaid story!

"I love mermaids, and this story is gettin goff to a great start. The writing is excellent from a technical and a narrative standpoint. Can't wait to read the rest. :)"

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Benehe

"Henehehebebbebebehehe"

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