Inkitt
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LOVED IT!

"Victor’s body horror moment, the demon literally noping out and Wyvern realizing he’s infected too... this plot just keeps leveling up."

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Butter on a stick

"Loved the... Plot ig is the word. Every chapter kept getting better and better leaving u curious for the next "

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My opinion

"It kind of moved fast from topic to topic. Other than that, I liked it. "

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It was a good concept

"I liked the story it self when I could actually differentiate the characters. You need to edit and make it known when the characters change I kept having to read and reread to figure it out I kept getting lost if you fix this and add punctuation to the missing spots you will have a great story the ending felt rushed but that may have been the back and forth "

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