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Retired Gay Lover

"Great story and characters. Enjoying the author’s writing and style. This is a very sad story of gay love. Not sure who should end up as a couple especially Zion. Although he seems to be in an abusive relationship I am wanting to know why his boyfriend acts that way and if Zion should stay and help him overcome his issues. Looking forward to the next part to this story. Looking forward to reading more from this writer. 😉🥰👍"

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Love me

"Weeellllll……..Part 2 is going to reveal all!!"

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Love Me

"Nice! ❤️"

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Good enough

"It can be more better but still good enough"

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Zion should slap the shit out outta him

"Zion should date his best friend "

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