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This is beautiful..

"I’m loving the arguable amount of character growth in the twins, the uniqueness, and Acacia."

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Excelente

"Excelente horaria atrapante y suspenso muy interesante "

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Süchtig machend

"Sehr tolles Buch Schade das ich schon am Ende angekommen bin "

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Valériane

"Histoire vraiment incroyable qui tien en haleine tous le long "

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A great read

"Am loving it "

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So far great story

"Can't wait for you to finish the story it's been great so far"

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The Twins

"Very interesting story. There were a few tense problems but not too many."

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Twin tormentors

"Great book so far, plot line goes astray in a few places, but overall enjoyable"

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The twins

"Sehr spannend man will garnicht mehr aufhören zu lesen.Sehr erotisxh"

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Good read

"Good read if you have an open mind and understand it is just a story. Author explains in parts of the story why it was written in such a way "

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The Twin Tormentors

"The book is a different level of sexy and spicy, I'm not used to it. I'm not big on them sexually assaulting her but she seems to secretly love it. Can't wait to finish"

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Please Update

"Are there going to be any updates "

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Morally black

"I hate how much I'm loving this story. The grammar throws me off sometimes, but it never takes me out of the moment. I wouldn't really recommend this because of its darker themes, but it's an addictive read."

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Good plot

"The plot is there but it needed more"

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Wild

"Crazy stuff. "

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La suite !?

"J'ai fini les 36 chapitres en 3H, j'étais beaucoup trop absorbée. L'histoire était géniale ! J'ai pas mal pleuré au début, et je pense que je ne pardonnerai pas les frères. Ensuite, personnellement, je trouve ça "pas ouf" que Acacia fasse aussi peu de choses pour aider Elise durant toute l'histoire. Mais je ne juge pas et je trouve au contraire que c'est parfait et qu'il ne faut rien changer. (c'est contradictoire pardon) J'ai hâte de lire la suite, j'espère que tu vas continuer à écrire car je veut absolument savoir comment ça va finir (et si Elise survit au mec armé dans le dernier chapitre) Tu as tout mon soutient ! L'histoire est clairement choquante mais tu écris super bien. Bonne vie à toi !!! (ou bonne soirée si tu préfères)"

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Tbh: get through the first few chapters

"I didn’t feel comfortable how it started out but I understand how necessary it was to understand the background for this book. If you are someone like me, it will hurt and you will cry. Once you are past those chapters, you will throughly enjoy the book. Guaranteed! I really hope that more chapters come out soon"

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The Twins and Elise

"Amazing sex scenes, "

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Loved this story

"I loved how this story is and the plot, it kept my interests, I will say there was a few typos that had me confused on some parts but when I understood what they meant it made it easier to understand. I would recommend this story to my friends or my sisters and I cant wait for an update"

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Increible...

"Es sucio y excitante a la vez...."

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