What is your opinion?
Review
"So I really like the idea for this book. What i would love, is just a bit more detail in the scenes! Overall though, really good so far :)"
So far...
"Your story's plot needs to have more build-up between the friends/future friends. Spend some more time at the bar/roof/wherever Leah and Elijah were. Let them have a couple more conversations, a few more laughs, THEN let Leah make some judgement about Elijah and leave, dragging her cousin and what's-her-face along with her. Plus, Elijah was a little calm about there being a cannibal outside the window. Might want to include a little more detail in that scene, too. Overall, it just needs more build-up/detail, and then you're good to go on with the story. If you're able to improve that, I'd definitely keep reading. It's a good idea, so do it justice. :)"
