What is your opinion?
Umm
"Ummm so far a little confused"
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"What in the world "
I loved it
"Haters will always be haters, unfortunately :( I loved this story when I read it a few months ago, I am sad that it's removed because people can't keep their talking in an adult voice :( I just wanted to know that I at least is a HUGE fan!!!"
Book
"Enjoyable book"
Vedi
"Loving this story very much. Good read. "
Love complications
"A good story"
Good to read once
"Very good book to read "
Love complications
"Good story and lovely plots. Grammatical mistakes here and there but still I enjoyed reading. Keep writing!!"
Good
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Complicated love
"I like the story but you really need to work on your grammar and proof read because sometimes you put the word in the wrong tense you put had instead of has several time and a few others are that way. Like the characters and the plot. Please don't take this as criticism use it to improve. Hope you have a great night!!"
Good looking forward
"Good looking forward "
Sukh
"Intresting"
Good
"Work on details and dialogue but overall it was a really good storyline. "
Great story
"This book is great I love the plot and the drama and everything but sometimes it was too much but still really good I guess the only thing I didn't like was the grammar it could've been better but overall it was a good book"
Love Complications
"Hi. Can I suggest some constructive criticism? Can you clarify Sam's workplace? She works in a cabin? Later, she walks out of the cabin and waves down a taxi? My mind's eye is confused. Slow down and set the scene. Introduce your protagonist. Also, at the beginning of a conversation, tell us who's speaking. I know what bday means because I write on the cards for the people close to me, but other readers might not know. Write it out then slide the acronym in the same sentence or somewhere close to the written word. Dialogues make the story go by faster, no lagging. I write a lot of dialogues, but you need to let us know who's speaking. Google How to use dialogue tags. Novel Writing Help should pop up. I just looked into it and it stated to be very careful as to how o use it. I know I overdo it and I should go back and re-edit. Also, there's a book written by Gloria Kempton - Dialogue, good book. She is a teacher on the Writer's Digest website. The classes are pricey because they critique your writing. To me, it was worth it. Hope this helps. Hey, wanna critique my writing? It's Help Me Find Me. Happy writing!"
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"Love it great story intense reading "
