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Rollercoaster of emotions

"I loved ur writing technique and the way u build up the suspense in the story. I loved reading this story and feeling all the emotions going in the story. Keep writing "

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Drops of pain

"Omg I was hooked on this book it was so good and was deffinaly a page turner I can't wait for the author to update new chapters as I can't wait to find out what happens next "

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It's amazing

"It's a great book and very fun to read. It has a great plot and I can wait to read the rest."

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Red drops of pain

"Very good except some spelling .I really like this story iv read it almost straight through it kept me reading .Love your work "

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A great coherence

"I liked the writing style, the coherence of the events, and most importantly the end of every chapter that makes you excited for what going to happen next. I liked the story . I'm looking forward to see your progress, and I can see that you are improving from chapter to another. Keep up your hard work 💪😉"

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This is amazing!! I can't wait to read more!

"I love this and I can't wait to read more, I am also very curious to see what happens between Noah and Sarah, can't wait to read more it's so good!"

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A dark concept

"A concept who not anyone can write in it."

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Good

"Good job."

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I am curious.

"This book got me curious and I want to continue it. I like the plot and I want to know what's going to happen next. Good job writer."

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I like it!!

"For a new writer. You're doing good. Keep up!!!"

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Nice plot

"Lots of editing needed.... In the beginning I found it depressing and a little vague but I liked the the story is manuevered... It's good to read if you are at leisure ..."

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Great plot!

"I enjoyed the plot very much as well as the characters as they added more to the story with their pasts and histories. It was pretty hard to read because of grammar and sentence structure which often caused choppy sentences and a point that was hard to follow. Overall I like the story a lot, but I think a grammar app would be very helpful in making the story flow smoother and add more depth. :) keep writing, I love it!"

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Drops of Pain

"I have not even started the story, and I'm perplexed. In your 2nd paragraph just explaining about your story, you have so many errors. I know its easy to over look, you have missing words and broken sentences. I'm not sure i want to try and read your story. Sorry "

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