Inkitt
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😍😍🤗🤗😒😒

"I really can't wait for the update but thre are some grammar issues that are a bit off putting but other than that the story is really intriguing and a must read"

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Secret & desires

"Like everything so far can’t wait for more chapters nor seeing how the they will grow"

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LOVELY

"I really like their character profiling and would love to see more development. "

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Good book

"Its a really good book. wished it was longer... :)"

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Amazing

"This is an amazing story. I can't wait to read more of it. By no means am I rushing you to write. I know it takes time to write, and I am willing to wait. So keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to what happens next. "

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Amazing

"Can’t wait for an update!!"

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Very interesting

"It has a very nice plot and almost from the beginning it is very exciting "

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Secrets & Desires

"The storyline is extremely great. The way the words are written, paint a picture of the whole scene."

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Omg I want more

"I liked this book so much. I would recomend this to my friend. No your writing is absolutely perfect"

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Captivating story and characters

"Intriguingly written story."

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Good read

"Great read hope you update really soon want to know what happen if he still got married or he fell in love with that young man "

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I love it

"Loved everything "

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I really like your Story!!

"I really like the plot of the Story so far and I really like the writing style but I noticed a few grammar mistakes but nothing too Bad. I'm really excited and looking forward to the next chapters! "

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Good

"The grammar was a little bit wrong. "

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Secrets and desires

"Well all I can say is that I really like the story I'm very interested in what's going to happen next when reading stories like this it makes you wonder what kind of research the writer did in order to right the story would I remember the story yes to whom not sure "

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Intrigued to read more and very captive narrative

"Nice story"

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Secrets and desires

"I really love this book but their was some words error like their was bad written instead of bed . But seriously i lobe this book very much .☺"

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Really, really good

"It is really, really good and I love the plot and everything except there are a few grammatical errors and without them it would run more smoothly also pls update soon!"

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Master

"Interesting story "

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